Audit
Personal Statement Intensive
A focused audit of one personal statement or motivation letter against the exact prompts and word limits you must meet.
From ¥28,000
When the rest of the file is in order, a weak personal statement still sinks a season. This intensive treats the essay as a document under audit: every claim checked against what the rest of your materials imply, every paragraph tested for whether a tired reader would keep going.
You leave with margin comments and a short note naming the three revisions that matter most — usually structure and evidence, rarely vocabulary alone.
Engagement notes
- For: Applicants whose forms and CV are stable but whose narrative essay still wanders or overclaims.
- Outcome: Specific cuts, reorderings, and evidence gaps marked against the prompt — not a new essay written in our voice.
- Scope: One statement up to 1,200 words; annotated PDF or Doc plus a one-page note.
- Outside scope: Full packet review, CV redesign, or multiple programme variants in one fee.
- Timing: Three business days standard. — Remote.
- Prepare: Final-ish draft and the exact prompt text.
- Fees: Fixed fee; second programme variant discounted when booked together.